Another Choice!

Another choice had fallen on me. This was even worse this time. Maths/Art and writing 201! My two favourite subjects. I really want to improve in my writing and learn new things or maths/art which is my all time favourite. But when it came down to it I chose writing because I just love it so much and we never get to do this much writing at school a day.

Writing 201 has been awesome! I am so glad I chose it now. The first thing we did was get a computer and login. Next, Nicola gave us a notebook and pencil to keep. She then spun some writing ideas and then whatever it landed one we had to use in our writing. We had to have chosen our setting, starting phrase and four words that we had to use in our writing. Here were mine:

Setting- Super Bowl

Starting Phrase- The postcard said "Greetings to you all."

Four words I have to use- Moo, wrist, tumble and burp.

At first I wasn't that excited about my Setting when I found out my story had to be at a baseball game! My interests are swimming, music, maths and writing not baseball! I then thought that this is teaching me a lesson and how to be a better writer so I felt happier later on.
Here is some of my story for you(without being checked Nicola)

The postcard said “Greetings to you all.”

I felt so excited knowing that I would be going to The Super Bowel in California, America. The postcard was from my friend who lives in California and said that I could go with my sister Rue to the World Cup. We all love baseball and can’t wait to go watch the game between the billers from England and the pillars from London.  We all want the pillars to win because they are from our hometown and they are just so incredible to watch. 

Moo! Our cow Millie started to interrupt us from the very lovely postcard from Mila. Whenever our cow does that it means that she is hungry and wants food. Of course we couldn’t just leave her as cows need to be fed as well as us. Rue and I started to argue about who should go feed Millie because we both HATE doing it. In the end I had to do it because I’m the older one and Rue said that I have to be a good role model to her. My shoulders lay low and I dragged my body off the couch. I felt exhausted from completing a marathon earlier in the day and walked as slow as a tortoise. Millie continued to moo but became even louder. I rushed out to feed Millie as fast as I could while she kept on mooing. 

When I got back inside Rue was still reading the postcard as she is so slow! I snatched the  card of her and finished reading it. Rue kept on going on about how I  should be a good role model, but I didn’t take any notice of her because she is old enough to make her own responsible decisions.